The answer to our quiz

by beagoodmom on September 25, 2008

The quiz was, which are real poems and which are Pookie Haikus, echolalic ramblings, (which I think I will call Haipookies, from now on)

Ready?

#1 is a real poem
#2 is a Haipookie
#3 is also a Haipookie
#4 is a real poem.

As Pookie and I sat there drawing after school yesterday, it struck me how alot of what he says sometimes makes sense and has a weird poetic quality. Here are a few more Haipookies from yesterday. Try to imagine yourself in a beat poetry club and feel the groove of the words, man.

A few Haipookies:

No running away, Kara.
Its your time.
No running away, Kara.
Kara, its your time.

That’s wonderful.
Imagination Movers
August
What’s that?

Chevy
Rainbow waterfall
The new Cottin Park
Running away.

Your sides,
You’re any wiser.
Progressive
Budweiser
We get it.

No.
Pig starts with P
Pig starts with T
Guys!

My goodness, this place is quite good.
No running away Kara
Its your time

Do more cartoons.
Our cartoons have made lots of drawings

Groovy, man. Groovy.

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moonablaze 09.25.08 at 7:22 pm

that’s so interesting, I always imagined that echolalia would be more like the same script repeated 2-3 times, then a different one, rather than mixing them up!

Rachel 09.25.08 at 9:13 pm

Yes, I knew I got it right! Now for my fabulous prize……I like the one about Budweiser. You should write these down and make a book of them. They sound like some of the actual poems I hear at local coffee shops. I mean, if I would pay 4.00 for a cup of coffee and to listen to these, I know other people would LOL.

Aunt Shel and My Mark 09.26.08 at 6:53 am

All we need now is a giant cup of coffee!

BeAGoodDad 09.26.08 at 8:56 am

Thanks a lot, Rachel. I have a feeling I’ll be asked to set up a new blog where we can post all the kids artwork, stories, and HaiPookies.

Rachel 09.27.08 at 11:53 am

Now now,BAGD, I think that would be a fabulous, fabulous idea. You’ll have to come up with an artsy-fartsy name of course.

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